Just cleaning up and polishing.
Mentor's Crits:
1. Shake from f45 to 65ish could be bigger and more dramatic.
2. offset the hands a bit to just break up and add some difference in takeoff and landing.
3. Push the landing from f62 to f72 another 10%, slightly quicker and larger spacing.
4. Knuckle readjustment f169 get the right hand to show more disparity through the pickup and rotation at beginning - by 2 frames, right now its moving too similar to the left hand.
So on with the revision, I'll post my final final polish shortly.
See you soon!
Mentor's Crits:
1. Shake from f45 to 65ish could be bigger and more dramatic.
2. offset the hands a bit to just break up and add some difference in takeoff and landing.
3. Push the landing from f62 to f72 another 10%, slightly quicker and larger spacing.
4. Knuckle readjustment f169 get the right hand to show more disparity through the pickup and rotation at beginning - by 2 frames, right now its moving too similar to the left hand.
So on with the revision, I'll post my final final polish shortly.
See you soon!
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